Changing Hearts '07 Flier

Changing Hearts

Put this together for our church's back to school college bash in September. (I'm on a sunburst kick.)

Thoughts?

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  • taken on 2007-08-15 16:30:55
  • posted on 15 Aug 2007

PhotoTalk

15 Aug 2007 » 1. sdesocio:

yeah its says intercourse. haha.
I would use "." instead of a comma.

I really like it.
The eagle feet olive branch is a bit weird, where did you get this image from?

15 Aug 2007 » 2. tito fantastic:

the bird feet did stand out a bit and made me thik why
but the color the feel... bold, regal, cool
i agree with using periods instead of commas
i like the no spaces and red and white.. but i think the red and white dispersal needs to be tweaked a little
for instance: "doorsopen" one color then "@" another then back to the other color for "5:30PM"
anyways, i clicked on this cuz it was attention grabbing
good

15 Aug 2007 » 3. mattlikeshockey2:

i like it. although the red is an odd red, almost pink. that bothers me a bit. either go all red, or pink, riding the middle looks like a print error.

15 Aug 2007 » 4. Jesse Gardner:

@sdesocio: "Free Intercourse... wha?" That's one way to get people out to church! Yeah, the eagle foot was the biggest hangup. It's actually a font I picked up called "Fleurons of Hope". The rest of the image is original artwork.

@tito: I think I'll go with the period suggestion. I don't think I really want to add another color to the words down below. I think it would take away from it's striking impact.

@matt: Shyeah. I love bothering people a bit with my color choices. If it makes them stop for a second glance, I've done my job.

15 Aug 2007 » 5. tito fantastic:

hey just noticed ur name.. my name is jesse as well

my suggestion was not for a third color to be added, it was to disperse the colors a little bit differently for reading purposes

this ur college age campaign for the year? good one if it is...

15 Aug 2007 » 6. Donut_Diva:

Nice job. I like it a lot!

15 Aug 2007 » 7. pwonflickr:

@sdesocio:

how do you get "intercourse" out of "constantrecourse"?

15 Aug 2007 » 8. Jesse Gardner:

Freudian slip, perhaps? ;)

15 Aug 2007 » 9. SeanPdesign - Drag {The Hitman}:

Magenta makes me happy and tingly all over!

15 Aug 2007 » 10. GHD PHOTOGRAPHY & DESIGN:

very nice. regal punk rockish... great look!

15 Aug 2007 » 11. BrandonMeek.com:

I thought it said intercourse too when I first saw it too.

16 Aug 2007 » 12. bjl050402:

I have to ask it... what is SeanP smokin'?


And can I have some?


I like this... some parts of it are a little hard to read... I would consider dropping all punctuation (except for .org) and just make your breaks with color or a "|". also, it looks like your URL is september29,2007oxfordvalleychapel.org. You might want to break that up with a space or something.

My suggestions for breaking up with color (for these purposes, ")" will indicate a color change):
SEPTEMBER)29)2007 OXFORD)VALLEY)CHAPEL).ORG
(this line is good, just drop the .'s)
CONSTANT)RECOURSE)|)DOORS)OPEN)@)5:30PM

I love the funky design, including the feet!

16 Aug 2007 » 13. SeanPdesign - Drag {The Hitman}:

I do not smoke anything.

I drink LOTS of coffee, coke and tea... mmmm coffee.... tea.... coke....mmmmm caffeine....makes me happy.

20 Aug 2007 » 14. Jesse Gardner:

Awesome tips everyone. Unfortunately, while I was out of town I think my design got waylaid and will have to live on in Flickr infamy. *sigh* That's what I get for taking a break.

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